***THIS REVIEW CONTAINERS SPOILERS***
The Twisted Ones was a bit faster-paced than the first book. It's also a bit shorter, which probably explains the pace. Book two picks up roughly a year after The Silver Eyes ends. The horror in this one is more frequent and far more gory than the first book as well. Centering around the Freddy Fazbear's Sister Location, which is somewhere between Charlie's college and Hurricane. And this time, Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, and even Foxy are part of the good guys, which is confusing all in itself in many ways, because the only animatronic that was good in The Silver Eyes was Golden Freddy, who made zero appearances in this book. Either way, there was plenty of gore and jump-scare moments throughout the book. This more horror, less snore-fest is really the only thing that saved this from being a 1-Star review. Thank you for listening to the fans, but it is what it is. I hope my review will be taken for what it is, as those who know me, know I RARELY ever give a bad review.
There were a few minor errors that I spotted, nothing that would really deter the reader, but I felt they should be mentioned since he authors do have the money and can afford better editing than they've gotten this time.
This book left many many things unanswered. Springtrap's answer to Charlie didn't sit well with me, and I'm sure it didn't sit well with others either. Chapter 13 is a rushed mess of nonsense that left me not only irritated, but very disappointed as well. Everything in that chapter was rushed and very little of it made any kind of sense at all. Where to begin with the holes in this book? Let's start with:
1) Springtrap... How the hell is he alive? IS he alive? Is he an intelligent zombie? His presence makes no sense other than the authors needing a villain, and who better than the one that was supposed to have been killed in the first book?
2) The animatronic heads in Charlie's dorm room serve NO purpose in the book. Not one. Yet for the amount of times they are mentioned, thought of, seen, etc, you'd think there was a reason, other than they were being built in a similar fashion than the Twisted Ones.
3)The door Charlie draws over and over, somehow without realizing she's doing it. She finally gets to the door and then NOTHING! With the house coming down around her, she doesn't have time to pry the mysterious metal door open and see why she's so drawn to it. And NO ONE goes back after the fact to find out. It's just a unanswered piece of the story.
4) Where are Freddy, Bonnie, Chica and Foxy that Twisted Freddy was somehow able to wiggle his half of body all the way to Charlie, using only ONE arm, and LITERALLY only there from the torso up? I'm sure they didn't just stop and vanish into thin air while knowing they'd been asked to help save Charlie.
5) I can only surmise that Aunt Jen was somehow miraculously with Charlie at the end of Chapter 13 because at some point during the months between Chapters 1 and Chapter 13 she died and not one person thought to tell Charlie. There's no other way Aunt Jen could have gotten into the area without being seen by the others there.
6) Chapter 14 is perhaps the most disappointing of them all. It's anticlimactic and doesn't even end with a real cliff-hanger. It's almost like there should be another Chapter after it, but there isn't.
The release for book 3, which is as of now is untitled, isn't scheduled until June 26. Unless this book fills all, and I mean ALL these loose-ends, I don't see myself bothering to read it any further. I don't want to sit around waiting years to find out in book #20 the answers to book #2.
I give this book 3 of 5 stars and pray the authors spend a little more time writing a story without so many holes and a better ending.
This is the first book by Dane Cobain I've had the pleasure of reading. There are no regrets. Mr. Cobain is a very articulate author. I'm not really sure the world is ready for how eloquently he can twist the English language to suit his purposes. While this tale is considered horror, it's more dark than scary. It's wonderfully dark though. The story spans over the course of a year (with a few snippets from decades earlier) and weaves a tale to tell your children to scare them into being good little angels. If you're a lover of religious fiction, this is definitely a book you'll want to check out. It delves deep into the psyche and will make you question every sin you've ever committed.
I did feel the end of Chapter 25 was a bit rushed though. There was more that needed to be said, or perhaps the scene should have been slowed down. It seemed to me that the father rushed Montgomery out of his home and already knew what the priest was going to say before he said it. The wife had zero reaction to her husband's suddenly odd behavior, this caught my attention and niggled in my brain throughout the rest of the book. I did spot a minor error on page 13 and feel Mr. Cobain should have that looked at as soon as possible, since it's the only error in the entire work and one his editor should have spotted easily since it's in plain sight. There's a minor loophole on chapter 26 that bothered me a bit too. While Jones acknowledged he watched the same broadcast Montgomery did, he feigns ignorance to the theory Montgomery suggests. That same theory is the one CERN theorized in the broadcast, though Montgomery has it being the reverse. I actually flipped all the way back to chapter 16 and reread it to make sure I was right on this lol. In Mr Cobain's defense, he did a nice job of trying to cover the hole up in the same chapter. Kudos!
All in all, this is a book I would gladly read again and again, as it strikes me as one I'd find something new within the pages every time I read it. I recommend this book to anyone who loves religious fiction, horror, paranormal, the list really goes on and on. This is a definite must-read for most people I know lol
I give this book 5 of 5 paws and look forward to seeing what else Dane publishes to tease my mind with.
This is an amazing story from this debuting author. Like all fantasy sagas, this one has more adventure and monsters than should be able to be contained in one place, but Ms. Mckernan pulled it off beautifully. This story is one that is sure to catch the reader's attention from the first page and keep the pages turning until the end. There are beautifully detailed illustrations scattered among the pages that really aid in bringing the story to life as well. Ms. Mckernan is lucky to be in league with such rare talent.
While the story is great, it needs quite a bit of work in the editing department. There are punctuation and grammatical errors everywhere, though most of them will not impede the reader's flow; they are seen but won't create a pause in the flow of the story for the most part. On page 444, there's a point-of-view swap. The story, which up until that point was told in third-person, switches to first-person for an entire paragraph for no valid reading. This error may cause a small hiccup to the average reader. All of these errors are quite common to authors who pour their very essence into their world and characters. They should, however, have been caught by an editor as they are in plain sight.
I believe with a little touch up to the editing and proper formatting, this story has the makings to be something the world hasn't seen in a very long time in the fantasy genre. I truly do look forward to the completion and release of the second book in this series.
I give this book 4 of 5 paws due to the amount of errors found.
Transcending the Legacy picks up where Ascending the Veil leaves off. It's a powerful ending to this amazing series. I would suggest some tissues being nearby...Seriously. Jesca and the Guardians are in the final countdown to save humanity from the creatures who crossed into our world. Even with the help of some new friends, this task wears more and more on Jesca, Nate and Xander as the time to fulfill the legacy grows closer and closer. The messages riddled in the series are loud and clear within this final book. Sacrifice comes in all forms. Love is the strongest link between people. Legacies will find their way, even if they happen in ways you aren't expecting.
Again, there were the same grammatical errors as the other three, though, only one or two will actually pause the flow of the reader.
Despite the errors, I give this book 5 of 5 paws. Ms. Kimball truly outdid herself with this work. I have read many of Venessa's books, and Transcending the Legacy is currently my favorite of her works. Well done, Venessa.
Ascending the Veil picks up where Surfacing the Rim left off. Jesca and her team not only learn more about themselves, but about what's going on and what the Sondians have truly unleashed on the world. As this book draws to a close, the Dobrians are preparing for the ultimate battle between good and evil; heaven and hell.
I adore how this entire story wove Scientific fact with the Christian lore of Revelations. I cannot even begin to imagine the amount of time and research Ms. Kimball put into this story, but I can assure you, it's definitely worth the read.
As with the first two, there are minor loopholes (not near as bad as the first two though) and the same scattering of grammatical errors throughout the book. By this point, if the reader is reading the books back to back, the errors won't impede as much as they are almost expected to be there.
I am both elated and anxious to start on the final book in this series, Transcending the Legacy and I hope it will answer some questions I have, as well as be as action-packed as the first three were.
I give this book 4 of 5 paws.
This is the second time I've read this book and I still love it. The story is original and action-packed and will keep readers turning pages just to see what Jesca gets herself into next. I love how detailed the world and character building is, it's clear that Ms. Kimball put in many sleepless nights researching the possibilities of what she was creating. This book is sure to be a hit with science buffs as it merges Science Fiction and the mechanics behind Quantum Physics with the lores of the paranormal.
There are quite a few errors I wish the author had looked into long before the book was archived. There are point of view switches not only within chapters but within sentences, there are minor (and at least one major) loopholes and minor grammatical errors. These will slow the flow of the story some. All in all, this is a great story and I look forward to rereading Surfacing the Rim, book two. I give this book 3 of 5 paws; It would have been 5, but I feel I have to lower it due to the amount and content of the errors.
This is the first book by Stacey Rourke that I've had the pleasure of reading and I have no regrets. If you're a fan of the Disney version of The Little Mermaid, this is a must-read. This story delves into the Sea Witch's back story, shedding some much-needed light on the villain we all love to hate. Told in the fashion of Maleficent, readers are brought back in time to before Triton was king, when he was just a small merlad and Vanessa, his older sister, gave him all the grief an older sibling is supposed to. The story is full of hardships and heartache for our mersiblings and the reader will find themselves feeling things for Vanessa they didn't before. This story will make the reader see The Little Mermaid in a whole new light and bring some understanding to why Ursela did the things she did. There's morals hidden throughout the book that are needed for more than a few adults and about every child on land... and in sea. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves mermaids, as young as 11 or 12.
I did find more wording errors (wrong tenses of words) in this book than I'm overly comfortable with and feel Ms. Rourke should look into a proofreader to help her editor out for future books. The errors, while obvious, don't really impede the flow of the story in any way more than a second glance to make sure the reader actually indeed saw an error. They are simple and as easily fixable as they are overlook-able.
However, while the average reader will more than likely simply not see the errors, I, being an editor, did and given the amount of them within this book, I cannot give it the 5 I want to. However, given the research, detailing, and character and world building Ms. Rourke did to create this story and shed light on one of Disney's most memorable villains, I give Rise of the Sea Witch 4 of 5 paws.
I await the next book in this series, don't keep us waiting too long, Ms. Rourke.
***This Review Contains Mild Spoilers***
I will start by saying, that this was birthday gift for my daughter last year, when she turned 10. She's a huge FNaF fan and I spent countless months hearing all about the animatronics and the things they did in the games that when this book was on preorder, it just seemed to be a must-have for her. I naturally, after hearing so much about it, had to read this book that piqued her love of the written word that she's read it 4 times in the last year.
This is an AMAZING book to have come from Scholastic. Not that Scholastic books are bad, but it's ultimately rare to find any that adults would pick up and become engrossed in, (The last Scholastic books that got to me like this one did were the Harry Potter books). It's almost like a combination of R.L. Stine and Stephen King in the way the story is written, but with how graphic I've heard the games are, this doesn't surprise me. What did surprise me, is how the story just catches you and even though they never actually name the old yellow rabbit, the reader knows he's Springtrap and that the yellow Freddy is Golden Freddy.
For the young adults, this story is full of shock scares. For those older, the story is almost a sad one, one that will put you in the mind of The Woman Black's story.
I did spot two plot holes that I feel both authors, while seasoned story tellers (one being the creator of the games, the other an author) should consider looking into and perhaps hire another editor who won't miss these vital, obvious errors.
In chapter 9, Sammy is mentioned as having been at Freddy Fazbear's, however, the whole reason Freddy's was created was because Sammy in fact vanished at the diner that preceded Freddy's, Fredbear's.
In chapter 11, John all but orders to stay behind with Jessica, who is slowly losing her sanity due to what's going on, and Carlton, who is in no condition to go anywhere since he can barely stand without assistance, yet well after John has left on his own, Charlie is with him and it a few pages later, Jessica is there as well, Carlton isn't mentioned until a few paragraphs later. There is never a mention of Charlie, Jessica or Carlton leaving the office where Dave was. These are obvious errors that nearly destroyed the flow of the story for me since both times, I flipped several pages back to reread to see if I had missed something that would explain these instances, only to see that I hadn't missed anything at all. The explanation is just non existent.
Despite the two errors, this story is a quick read for an avid reader, even with it's averaging 30 pages per chapter, and it's definitely one that any fan of R.L. Stine will enjoy, as will any fan of horror in general.
Of course, When I saw The Twisted Ones (the second book to this series) was out for Preorder, it was ordered for my daughter's birthday this year. Maybe she'll be a good child and let me read it first so I don't have to wait a year this time >~.^<
While the story itself is worth 5 paws, due to the plot holes mentioned in my review, I can only give it 4.
Wow, just wow. This is the first book by the young and very talented Nadege Richards that I've had the honor of reading and it blew me away. Asylum 54.0 is everything Dystopian as well as Sci-Fi fans are looking for. This books starts with action and ends with it, not to mention there are some amazing, comic book-style art works interwoven within the pages that really bring certain scenes and the characters to life. I absolutely Mathai! She's everything I hope my little girl will be when she's older; brave, strong, independent, and willing to fight for what's right. She's an amazing rolemodel for young girls of all colors and ages and her story is an amazing one. There are a few seemingly slow spots within the story, but since it's the first of a series, it makes sense. This book begins the adventure and thus there's backstory and the such to read about. There are no "boring" parts of this book. Every word is deliberately placed to entrap the reader within Mathai's world. Told in the first-person, this story will capture your imagination and you will see and feel all that Mathai does and then some.
I would recommend this book, and more than likely the entire series, to anyone who loves a well-written story, even those as young as around middle-grade age since there's no swearing and no adult themes. Ms. Richards has proven herself to the masses and shown us that even the younger writers have stories worth hearing.
I look forward to the second installment of this saga, Sanctum 92 and eagerly await its release.
I give this book 5 of 5 paws. Well done, Nadege, you've restored my faith in indie writers.
This book will make you laugh over and over. If you're an Elvis fan, even if you aren't, this book is worth the read. The cast of characters are colorful and well-delevoped, the plot line is well-thoughtout, the story is creative and original, and the authors did an amazing job bringing this all together for the reader. There's tons of "Fun Facts" about Elvis littered throughout the story and each character has their own Elvis story; some are a bit more out there than others. All-in-all, while the contemporary and general fiction genres are not my usual reads, I'm really glad I had the chance to read this one. It's been awhile since a story has stuck in my head the way Surviving Elvis Week has. Kudos, authors, I look forward to seeing what else you release.
I give this book 5 of 5 paws.