While this story is good, I had a hard time getting into it. I found the beginning rather slow and honestly dreaded picking it up again. I found no real errors, only seriously like one to two spelling errors and I think four instances where if the sentence would have began with a noun instead of starting with verb, it would have sounded better. However the four instances this occurred in, I had to read the sentence three times to understand it.
Around chapter six is when the story started to get interesting enough to hold my attention. Pretty much from there on out it held my attention enough to finish the entire book in less than a day. The story will touch on an array of different emotions and is every fast paced.
The characters are very well thought out and it's easy to slip into each character that controls whatever scene the reader is reading. There were a couple of small loopholes that while I eagerly awaited them to be filled, sadly they were not. Hopefully they will be dealt with in the sequel.
I give this book 3 of 5 paws.